Just aother poem I wrote :)?

It's Like...



What is love?

and can it truly be defined?

Is it a feeling felt at heart,

or a feeling in the state of mind?



I've experienced it before

and know of others who have as well

But it seems as if no one truly knows

for when questioned, no one can tell



It's hard to put in words,

and may be different to the norm

at some point in life,

it was said or shown in some form



So again I ask, what is love?



It's like waking up in the morning,

the sun beaming upon your shades

Keeps you warm inside

as it continues to hinder %26amp; fade



It's like having breakfast in the morning,

to keep you strong for the rest of the way

Without it you'd feel restless

for it keeps you focused for the day



It's like shopping for the right pair of shoes,

how it fits and manages on your feet

and when the right one is found

Assured, its yours to keep



It's like keeping a popsicle froze

If removed out the fridge it will melt

Like love you don't want it broken

Unfortunately, a feeling most have felt



It's like poetry with rhythm

must get to the listener's heart

Like love if not reached,

it will set you apart



It's like black ink on black paper

It can't be seen thru the eyes

Without sense %26amp; communication,

It'll only remain in disguise



It's like manners at the dinner table,

etiquette for all to see

Like love, without respect it's impossible

to maintain the value of We



It's like watering plants,

blossoming flowers is the outcome

joined together to make it thru

Like love, two heart's make one



It's like needing oxygen to live,

and breathing to stay alive

And saying the words I Love You

helps the relationship survive



So again I ask, what is love?

Just aother poem I wrote :)?
Good one. You seem to end your poems with a line that includes the title of the poem. I oftnen do that, too. Keep up the good work!
Reply:great attempt at defining love
Reply:i luved it but i think it needs to be trimmed to atleast two stanza`s..
Reply:Thats a good poem, but i little too long.
Reply:I really like the images you used here. There were very fresh and original.



Very nice.
Reply:great u get a star my lady
Reply:oh that's beautiful, i wish i could write my thoughts and feelings down like you do. please answer my question thanks.
Reply:its nice



you are putting on airs I think in needing to put into words



the best things, like love, feelings, religious experience, teaching, savoring the sunshine and nature



can't be put into words



fun to try sometimes, nice metaphores you made also, hmmmmmmm