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So she wakes up


In time to brake down


She left a note up on the dresser


And she's right on time


You don't know anything, right or wrong





I said I know-ow-ow-ow, and she said so-o-o-o


I want to panic but I've had it so I go-o-o-o


You don't owe anything to anyone


But don't take your life


Cause it's all that you've got


You'd be better off just up and leaving


If you don't think they will stop





And when you wake up


Everything is gonna be fine


I guarantee that you wake in a better place, and in a better time


So you're tired of living


You feel like you might give in, well don't


It's not your time





Flipping through the paper today


Looking for a specific page


Don't want to find her full name followed by dates


Cause when I left her alone, she made a sound like a moan


"Your known by everyone for everything you've done"


**** buying flowers for grave,


I'd rather buy you a oneway non-stop to anywhere


Find anyone, do anything, forget and start again, look


She said she won't go, it hurts to much, to stand by


You've got to stop and draw a line


Everyone here has to choose a side, tonight


The moment of truth is haunting you


Don't forget your family regardless of what you choose to do


You can't decide, and they're all screaming "why won't you?"


I'll start the engine, but I can't take this ride for you


I'll draw your bath and I'll load your gun


But I hope so bad that you'll bathe and hunt





Annie's tired of forgetting about today and always planning for tomorrow


(tomorrow) tomorrow Annie says


"The saddest day I came across was when I learned that life goes on without me"


(without me) without me Annie says


"If everyone has someone else and I ain't got nobody's love to save me"


(to save me) to save me Annie says


"I think I'll pass away tonight cause it seems I'll never get it right if it's just me"


(just me) just me Annie says





And when you wake up


Everything is gonna be fine


I guarantee that you'll wake in a better place, in a better time


So you're tired of living


You feel like you might give in, well don't


It's not your time





Annie says she wouldn't mind if they never find a cure for all her problems


(her problems) her problems Annie says


As long as she has someone near to make it clear she does not need to solve them


(to solve them) to solve them Annie says


"Oh this loneliness is killing me, it's filling me with anger and resentment,"


(resentment) resentment Annie says,


"I'm turning into someone that I never thought I'd have to be again"





And when you wake up


Everything is gonna be fine


I guarantee that you'll wake in a better place, in a better time


So you're tired of living


You feel like you might give in, well don't


It's not your time





Annie's tired of forgetting about today and always planning for tomorrow


Tomorrow Annie says


"The saddest I came across was when I learned that life goes on without me


Without me Annie says


"If everyone has someone else and I ain't got nobody's love to save me,


To save me Annie says


I think I'll pass away tonight cause it seems I'll never get it right if it's just me


It's just me Annie says





And when you wake up


Everything is gonna be fine


I guarantee that you'll wake in a better place, in a better time


So you're tired of living


You feel like you might give in, well don't


It's not your time





And even if it was, oh, I wouldn't let you go


You could run run run run, but I will follow close


Someday you will say "That's it, that's all"


But i'll be waiting there with open arms to break your fall


I know that you think that you are on your own


But just know that I am here and I'll lead you home


If you let me she said forget me but I can't

What do you think of this song?...?
it's good, but very long. nice
Reply:This is great! If you really want to get this recorded, then sing or read it out loud, and time yourself. Most songs need to be about three minutes long (for a variety of reasons). Next you can figure how to get it close to that. I love your rhythm and your energy.
Reply:Wow. that was really good. You should record that. I think it is the best song I have ever heard!!! That made my day! :)











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