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Happy Spring

Warm weather is finally here !the children and i have been very busy talking about things that grow . we started the week by planting some flowers, made a chart about things that can grow and things that cant grow. we practice counting by counting seeds inside a apple and talked about other fruits that has seeds inside of it . we also made flowers out of tissue paper and paper plates.



This week we will be making homemade growth chart with construction paper , experimenting with celery to see plants drink water and talking about what helps us grow. we are also expecting a visitor from the pet store and he will be giving the children some educational, hands on experience about how to help pets grow into healthy animals . we are looking froward to this week of exciting fun. If you have any question about what we are doing this week please feel free to contact me at 555-5555.





Sincerly Michelle

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Happy Spring!



Warm weather is finally here and the children and I have been busy talking about things that grow.



This week, we planted flowers and made a chart identifying which things grow and which do not. We used items from nature to practice counting, make crafts and play games.



This week we are making a growth chart (ADD WHAT YOUR CHARTING?)

We are also going to have a science experiment. We will be learning about how plants drink water, and how we need water to grow as well.



We will have a visitor from a pet store and he will be talking to us about how our pets grow and what we can do to help them grow healthy and strong.



If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me at :***-****.
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Reply:Sounds great
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Reply:If you are not a teacher, just wanting to become one, it sounds reasonable. However, if you are planning to send this as a newsletter or submit it in other written form, please check your grammar and spelling.



But the idea itself sounds good.